August 15, 2008

Future Plans

We should go swimming. Her eyes scanned the lake in front of them.
That makes me remember when we were younger- you remember how we’d go swimming almost every day after school? He brushed a stray blade of grass from his shoulder and watched the slightest hint of a wave gently cradle a group of cattails [...]

August 15, 2008

Follow Me Down

This is the second draft of the story, based on comments and personal reflection.  I didn’t want to simply delete the old story because it is good for comparison purposes.  That said, I think this version is far superior.

C> Story Integration Initiation…….
Beginning Story Integration Initiation…
[Formulating Exposition]… Detailing Parameters Setting… Random Generator In Effect- Correcting Unknown [...]

August 15, 2008

Time Crunch

Running out of time he thought, pushing through the crowds milling about on the sidewalk.  Ten minutes left, if my watch is right.  No excuses this time- I’ve been living with excuses for long enough.  He darted around a rather large woman eating a hot dog and countless business men with their identical brief cases and [...]